Hi Mahanga, I like how you included some basic information about you. Maybe next time you could try including some more detial in your profile so people know a bit more about what kind of person you are e.g I like playing netball and reading books. What did you enjoy when doing this subject?
Kia ora Mahanga, I really like how you added a quick briefing about yourself. Maybe try writing a bit more about what you like or write little facts, E.g I love Harry Potter and going surfing at Blue House. Your post reminds me of our school production this year. Room 5 is doing a dance to a Michael Jackson song Thriller! What did you enjoy the most writing this post?😁
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Hi Mahanga, I like how you included some basic information about you. Maybe next time you could try including some more detial in your profile so people know a bit more about what kind of person you are e.g I like playing netball and reading books. What did you enjoy when doing this subject?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mahanga, I really like how you added a quick briefing about yourself. Maybe try writing a bit more about what you like or write little facts, E.g I love Harry Potter and going surfing at Blue House. Your post reminds me of our school production this year. Room 5 is doing a dance to a Michael Jackson song Thriller! What did you enjoy the most writing this post?😁
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