Monday, 11 June 2018

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My name is Mahanga. I go to Ormond School. I am in Rimu Hub. I am a boy. I have 2 sisters. I like Bob Marley and Michael Jackson.

5 comments:

  1. Hi Mahanga, I like how you included some basic information about you. Maybe next time you could try including some more detial in your profile so people know a bit more about what kind of person you are e.g I like playing netball and reading books. What did you enjoy when doing this subject?

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  2. Kia ora Mahanga, I really like how you added a quick briefing about yourself. Maybe try writing a bit more about what you like or write little facts, E.g I love Harry Potter and going surfing at Blue House. Your post reminds me of our school production this year. Room 5 is doing a dance to a Michael Jackson song Thriller! What did you enjoy the most writing this post?😁

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  3. hi poppy and ariana.

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  4. I realy like the way you talk to me thank you guys

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  5. hi i like rugby im 10 years old

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